my box.

My box

I will put in my box a UFO from Mars.

A pit of fire from a burning tree.

A sinking submarine.

I will put in my box a flying pineapple that can go around the Earth in seconds.

A sun that can smile.

A boat that can not float.

I will put in my box a piece of lightning in a jar.

A tickling tongue twister.

A car running down the road.

An eyeball that can talk.

I will put in my box a snake with 50 legs.

A table that can walk.

A time-travelling train.

My box is made of the centre of the sun.

The hinges are skeleton arms.

I will be rich in my box.

I will buy a mansion with a Swimming pool as big as a Soccer field.

the a&p show.

On the thursday 16 November we went to the a&p show. The next day we had to do a thing about it. here is what we had to do.                                               

                                                                                     This is what I got done.

This is my ride. It is a space ship ride, you get in it and you fly around and then you get shot at.

These are my facts about the a&p show.

 These

 are my facts about the Llama. 

Today we had to present them on cardboard. We had to write a positive thoughtful helpful comment. This is what my buddy wrote for me.

This is my work I hope that it is good.

The ocean maker.

this is the video that we had to write about for our story.

 after I had written the story I had to edit it.we had to write a plan before we got to write out story. we only got to watch up until she saw the light house. the character in my story is a boy even though the person in the video is a girl our teacher said we can change the character .can I please have sume feedback on my story. I want to know if it makes sense where I have put the paragraphs because I do not use use paragraphs in my writing.

this is my story.

The ocean maker.

was flying over a dried up ocean. There were boats everywhere, there is even a submarine. Dave was looking for a cloud to use his Ocean maker. he was looking everywhere with his binoculars for a cloud but he couldn't find one. Just when he was about to give up he saw a lighthouse and the light was going. the light was pointing at a cloud.  he was about to fly to the cloud when a plane appeared out of nowhere and started shooting at him. Dave started to shoot back at the plane. They both hit each other at the same time and started Heading towards the ground.

luckle Dave Survived the crash but his plane wasn't as lucky. it was Smash to smithereens. he got the Oceanmaker get out and started walking towards the cloud. when he got there He  the ocean make it into in the cloud and then Thousands of clouds appeared and it started pouring down. in one month the ocean was back to normal.

movie character day.

Today in Rimu it was movie character day and I was Indiana Jones

 I am the little one. My mum made a gun holder and a thing to pout me wip in. and goes on my belt. The other one in the photo is Mis Tebbett. 

time table

Hi this is my time table for week four. look at what i'm doing this week.

Willam pike

This week in Rimu William pike came over on wednesday. he talks about his leg and how his leg

got chopped of and that stuff.

world's worst children

this week for read and feed the teacher is reading world's worst children 2. My favorite is.

Competitive COLIN

Colin has to win at everything. Rules and fair play mean nothing to him. He has to be the winner. Number one! writing bu David Williams

School holidays

In the holidays me mum and Nikita went to nana and grandads four the last week of the  holidays and it was raining everyday, but on the day we left it was sune. But because they live in Paripari and there was lots of roadworks and traffic it took about 6 or 7  hours to get back home.  and in merchiston we stopt to get something to eat and then mum found a shop coold Submodes tresher and we had a look in it and it is a really cool shop and I ended up buying I think 6 or 7  little goblets on a tray and it was 18 dolls. i also bought a little olden day candle holder and that was 4 dolls . and I brought a little thing and it was 4 dolls. her is a pitcher.

Yes it's back! It's the one, the only, the  Black hole story. The full version!

The black hole.

“Year, 2017, month October, day Tuesday. In one hour my crew and I are going to go to space on the Enterprise. T-10 seconds, 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1 liftoff.

There it goes, into space it was the most magnificent site in the whole universe. Until a black hole suddenly appeared. It started ripping holes out of the ship. All the crew died.

The only survivor was the captain, Neil,(Neil has brown hair and brown eyes)  but the black hole took the ship to with gruesome, monsters eating each other. then they fixed their eyes on Neil.

He went to get his phaser but is wasn't  there, then he saw it, it was 50 meters away under a ginormous monster, with eyes the size of a brick walls, and he was as big as an island. It was staring right at him.

Then the beast suddenly lept at him but Neil ran towards it to get his phaser. and the monster just missed him and his mouth went over a different monster and he ate it.

Neil got his phaser and shot the monster. But the phaser was on stun mode so it just put the monster to sleep. But Neil didn't care he just ran and ran and ran until he couldn't run any more. He was so tired that he just fall on the ground and went to sleep.

Unfortunately he went to sleep in a monster nest fill of monster eggs. When he woke up the mum monster was there staring at him 10 centimetres away from him, then it gave out a roar so loud you could hear it from space. It nearly made Neil deaf.

Then he had a thought since the monster that was in front of him was one that can fly, if he trained it he can make a portal back to Earth.

So he got some fish and gave it to the monster and the monster  ate it. Then it was trained and Neil could ride it.

But the first thing he had to do was name it so he named it Sally. But then the eggs suddenly began to wriggle and then they blew up and when the dust cleared there was three baby monsters even though they weren't really monsters yet, because they were about the size of a chicken, and they were the cutest thing that Neil hed ever seen in the whole universe.

Fortunately they had wings and they could fly. But now Neil had to name these baby monsters. He checked to see if they were boys or girls and they were all boys . Their names are Jones, David and Indiana.

Then Neil got back on Sally and he flew off in the direction of a mountain, there shouldn't be any monsters there and the baby monsters followed them. When they got there the mountain was swarming with monsters so they didn't go there.  Then they went to a different muntin and that one was swarming with monsters as well, so they didn't go there. That went wrong for about 1 hour. When the funnel found a mutant with no monsters on it they went there and made a hut because it will take a while to make the portal.

When they did that that they went back to where the Enterprise got destroyed because they needed sume stuff to make the potil. It took 10 days to make the potill and in the end it looked like this.

 

When it is on it looks like this.

So the portal was done and it was time for Neil to go home and he can take Sally and the babies. So they went through the portal and they were in New Zealand.  

But then the ground started to shake and then out of nowhere came was a ginormous monster, and started so destroy the buildings and then it saw Neil, (It was the monster from the start). Neil reached for his phaser but he remembered he left it in the world with all the monsters then he heard the sound off sirens and the sound was beginning to get louder and louder and louder. Until he could see cop cars and helicopters. But the monster saw them too and with one swipe with his ginormous claw he sent the police cars flying. Then it leapt at Neil, he brast himself and got ready to die.

But he didn't die he opened his eyes, and he saw the ginormous monster 20 meters away from him with Sally 10  meters away from him. Sally was protecting Neil. The monster dashed at Sally, but she dodged it and bit the monster on the head and then on the butt and when Sally did that she ripped chunks of flesh of it. And then Sally bit him in the chest and then she went to get Neil so he can go through the hole in the monster's chest that Sally made when she bit the monster.

So Neil went in the monster and went to the monster heart and then he got his knife out of his pocket ( it was a pocket knife) and he got the knife out and stabbed the monster's heart and the monster gave out a roar and then it dropped down to the ground dead!

Then Neil came out of the monster and went to Sally. They had done it and defeated the monster. But in the monster would there other monsters felt the death of the ginormus monster it died because he was the king of all monster and they will had their revenge.

(Wait for the next story).

This is my narrative story about a man could Neil.

“Year, 2017, month October, day Tuesday. In one hour my crew and I are going to go to space on the Enterprise. T-10 seconds, 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1 liftoff.

There it goes, into space it was the most magnificent site in the whole universe. Until a black hole suddenly appeared. It started ripping holes out of the ship. All the crew died.

The only survivor was the captain, Neil, but the black hole took the ship to with gruesome, monsters eating each other. then they fixed their eyes on Neil.

He went to get his phaser but is wasn't  there, then he saw it, it was 50 meters away under a ginormous monster, with eyes the size of a brick walls, and he was as big as an island. It was staring right at him.

Then the beast suddenly lept at him but Neil ran towards it to get his phaser. and the monster just missed him and his mouth went over a different monster and he ate it.

Neil got his phaser and shot the monster. But the phaser was on stun mode so it just put the monster to sleep. But Neil didn't care he just ran and ran and ran until he couldn't run any more. He was so tired that he just fall on the ground and went to sleep.

Unfortunately he went to sleep in a monster nest fill of monster eggs. When he woke up the mum monster was there staring at him 10 centimetres away from him, then it gave out a roar so loud you could hear it from space. It nearly made Neil deaf.

Then he had a thought since the monster that was in front of him was one that can fly, if he trained it he can make a portal back to Earth.

So he got some fish and gave it to the monster and the monster  ate it. Then it was trained and Neil could ride it.

But the first thing he had to do was name it so he named it Sally. But then the eggs suddenly began to wriggle and then they blew up and when the dust cleared there was three baby monsters even though they weren't really monsters yet, because they were about the size of a chicken, and they were the cutest thing that Neil hed ever seen in the whole universe.

Fortunately they had wings and they could fly. But now Neil had to name these baby monsters. He checked to see if they were boys or girls and they were all boys. Their names are Jones, David and Indiana.

Then Neil got back on Sally and he flew off in the direction of a mountain, there shouldn't be any monsters there and the baby monsters followed them.  
to be continued.

E-asttle writing test

Today in Rimu we had to do an E-asttle writing test and this is what I did. An E-asttle is a writing test when we get giving a thing to write about. this one is. I heard a whisper but know one was there.  

It was just an ordinary day at school but that all changed when suddenly the power went out and a really big cloud and big as a planet  went in front of the sun. and then we heard a whisper saying “you are not alone, you are not alone”. Then we saur a monster the size of a soccer field and it seat it’s name was, Dave. and he said “you are worthless creches. surrender and I will eat you fast so you don't feel any pain.then Mikael said “no, go away and you won't feel eney pain”. (Mikael has super powers) then the monster began to burst with laughter so loud that you could heir it from in space. “Hu hu hu hu you think that I will run from you. You are  worthless creches hu hu hu hu hu” then Mikael said “ok you asked for this” then Mikael ran at the monster. He ran as fast as lightning. Then he used his webe powers and tid the monster up. But the monster was strong and he broke  the webs and he dived at Mikael but he mist him had he hit the ground. Then Mikael said to the monster. “Go back to where you came from and I will not hurt you anymore”. So the monster left. But the cloud was still there so Mikael went up to it and he saw  it wasn't a cloud, it was a spaceship then he saw the monster in it and then it vanisht and was never seen again. The End.                     

Learning to use Screencastify

today in Rimu we have been Learning to use Screencastify. Here is my thing I did we had to do it about maths.

Attitude

Last week on Wednesday Phil from attitude came and tokt to us about who we are and I am an otter. An otter is a person who always has fun. there is an otter a lion a beaver and a  Labrador. a Labrador is someone who is always kind. a lion is a leader. a beaver is someone who gets stuff done the first time.

    Hers Phil.

My Profile

In Rimu we had to make a Profile about ourselves. here's mine

My audience

We are learning to create a positive digital footprint.

We often share personal information when we are online. The people we share with could be our friends and family or people we don't know. We need to make smart decisions about what personal information we share online.

wild eyes

This term the year 5 and 6 did wild eyes which is a site that has a holl lot of machines that you can do and earn points. here is a slideshow about what I did.

this week I finished my store about Super Pug Man and Pug Vader her it is. it took a while to do but I did it.

Super Pug Man and Pug Vader.

One day in a galaxy far far away there lived a creature, not human, not cat, but dog. His name was Super Pug Man or S.P.M. for short. Super Pug Man’s life was perfect, well almost perfect. Super Pug Man had an enemy but it was not just any enemy it was the worst enemy in the world his name was Pug Vader. Pug Vader didn't have any superpowers but  he had a lightsaber and it could cut through anything.

But Super Pug Man had superpowers he had laser eyes he could fly he had ice breath he is really strong he had  x ray vision  super hearing and he was fiyer prof. Now these dogs have not been enemies for ever they were once best friends. It all started a pub on the planet made out of diamonds it was could Dimed planet. So Super Pug Man werkt at the bar and Pug Vader wanted a drink so Super Pug Man gave his friend one but Pug Vader didn't pay Super Pug Man said that he has to pay but Pug Vader just punch him so Super Pug Man kicked hi out I mean litr kicked him out. And Pug Vader swore an oath that Super Pug Man would be his enemy till he dies and he said that to Super Pug Man. so that’s the story of how those two charming fellas became enemies for life. Now for the story of how Pug Vader got his lightsaber. Ounces Pug Vader had sworn that oath he thought Super Pug Man has super powers I need some type of weapon. I got it I will make my own lightsaber I will make the shape of it out of metol and then I will go to Super Pug Man and mach him angry at me and he will use his laser eyes and they will hit the metal and heat it up. So he went to Super Pug Man and made him angry and he tried to use his laser eyes but they hit the metal and heated it up. So that's how Pug Vader got his weapon. Now, Pug Vader new that he couldn't fight Super Pug Man ulon . he needed somebody to help him so he went to find somebody to help him. And this is who he found.

         His name was Mistre Stormtrooper.but Super Pug Man new that he couldn't beat Pug Vader by himself so he went to find somebody to help him. And this is who he found.

His name was Bat Dog. So Super Pug Man and Pug Vader had the same ider they wanted to kill each other so the upgrade to met on the plan it of laver it is could volcano planet it is cuvid in volcanos and laver so that they can push each other in the laver. And they took their halpis with them it took quite a while to get there but they eventually got there. As soon as they got there Pug Vader attack Super Pug Man and posht him into laver but Super Pug Man is fire proof to he didn’t die. He just went up to Pug Vader and said “you want to play dirty? then let's play dirty” and then he posht Pug Vader into a pit of laver and he dide. But then he remembered about Mistre Stormtrooper and Bat Dog so he went  up to Mistre Stormtrooper and cut a hole in him with his laser eyes and he dide. Super Pug Man and Bat Dog had won the battle so they went back to Dimed planet and had a drink.

               

The End.

this week in Rimu we have been doing art we had to choose 3 of our favorite NZ artist. And then we had to choose one piece of art out of one of the 3 that we chose and cope it digital this is the one that I chose to cooe. And this is how it turned out. It is really hard to do it because it is not a touch screen. It took me a while and this is the best I can do.