E-asttle writing test

Today in Rimu we had to do an E-asttle writing test and this is what I did. An E-asttle is a writing test when we get giving a thing to write about. this one is. I heard a whisper but know one was there.  

It was just an ordinary day at school but that all changed when suddenly the power went out and a really big cloud and big as a planet  went in front of the sun. and then we heard a whisper saying “you are not alone, you are not alone”. Then we saur a monster the size of a soccer field and it seat it’s name was, Dave. and he said “you are worthless creches. surrender and I will eat you fast so you don't feel any pain.then Mikael said “no, go away and you won't feel eney pain”. (Mikael has super powers) then the monster began to burst with laughter so loud that you could heir it from in space. “Hu hu hu hu you think that I will run from you. You are  worthless creches hu hu hu hu hu” then Mikael said “ok you asked for this” then Mikael ran at the monster. He ran as fast as lightning. Then he used his webe powers and tid the monster up. But the monster was strong and he broke  the webs and he dived at Mikael but he mist him had he hit the ground. Then Mikael said to the monster. “Go back to where you came from and I will not hurt you anymore”. So the monster left. But the cloud was still there so Mikael went up to it and he saw  it wasn't a cloud, it was a spaceship then he saw the monster in it and then it vanisht and was never seen again. The End.