This is my narrative story about a man could Neil.

“Year, 2017, month October, day Tuesday. In one hour my crew and I are going to go to space on the Enterprise. T-10 seconds, 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1 liftoff.

There it goes, into space it was the most magnificent site in the whole universe. Until a black hole suddenly appeared. It started ripping holes out of the ship. All the crew died.

The only survivor was the captain, Neil, but the black hole took the ship to with gruesome, monsters eating each other. then they fixed their eyes on Neil.

He went to get his phaser but is wasn't  there, then he saw it, it was 50 meters away under a ginormous monster, with eyes the size of a brick walls, and he was as big as an island. It was staring right at him.

Then the beast suddenly lept at him but Neil ran towards it to get his phaser. and the monster just missed him and his mouth went over a different monster and he ate it.

Neil got his phaser and shot the monster. But the phaser was on stun mode so it just put the monster to sleep. But Neil didn't care he just ran and ran and ran until he couldn't run any more. He was so tired that he just fall on the ground and went to sleep.

Unfortunately he went to sleep in a monster nest fill of monster eggs. When he woke up the mum monster was there staring at him 10 centimetres away from him, then it gave out a roar so loud you could hear it from space. It nearly made Neil deaf.

Then he had a thought since the monster that was in front of him was one that can fly, if he trained it he can make a portal back to Earth.

So he got some fish and gave it to the monster and the monster  ate it. Then it was trained and Neil could ride it.

But the first thing he had to do was name it so he named it Sally. But then the eggs suddenly began to wriggle and then they blew up and when the dust cleared there was three baby monsters even though they weren't really monsters yet, because they were about the size of a chicken, and they were the cutest thing that Neil hed ever seen in the whole universe.

Fortunately they had wings and they could fly. But now Neil had to name these baby monsters. He checked to see if they were boys or girls and they were all boys. Their names are Jones, David and Indiana.

Then Neil got back on Sally and he flew off in the direction of a mountain, there shouldn't be any monsters there and the baby monsters followed them.  
to be continued.