Robot city.
Once upon a time there was a robot called Frank who could adjust his arms and he has wheels for feet and he can shoot lasers out of his eyes. Who lived in a future city filled with robots. One day an evil robot called the evil doer took over the city. And so Frank hides in a cave far away from the city. However the evildoer finds him so Frank hides behind a rock and ambushes him. Then they have a fight and Frank flees. Eventually Frank finds his way into the city and into the Evildoers castle. In the end the evildoer falls into a pit of lava which was met for Frank.
I have enjoyed reading your story, Mikael. You have detail about what is happening and your sentence starters are different each time. I would like to why someone would want to take over the city. In your next story, think about adding even more detail about what the characters look like. Readers love that sort of thing.
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Wow this is a great story that you wrote. I bet Frank will be a really famous robot by saving the world. But what do you mean met for Frank?
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