Narrative plan.

Tomorrow in Rimu we had to write a narrative. Today we did the pane, Mrs Taylor did the start of it for a starter. Here is my one.

Planning

Introduction: He had found it lying alone, deserted, abandoned in the attic. After making the discovery, jon had gazed and marvelled at it for some time. Where had it come from? Why had no dust settled upon it, as it had done over everything else that resided in her attic? A layer of the thick dust blanketed the attic floor, and as the sunlight glared through the attic windows, the dust particles yet to settle were illuminated as they danced in the stuffy air. Yet, the mirror looked flawless, untouched by age, not a finger print in sight. Time Connectives -Then -After that -Eventually -Meanwhile -Previously -Soon -At that very moment -Within minutes Problem: Jon propped the mirror up against one of the thick, timber beams that jutted from the attic floor. Settling down into a comfortable position, she tentatively placed a finger against the glass… Next: he touches the mirror and then he has a funny feeling. ISPACE Bounding through the… Anger came over him like a wildfire… Beyond the… Frantically… Despite… Tempted… After that: he pretends nothing happened but she new he was diffident. Ending: He uses what he got and then ether becomes a here of a villain. ( I haven't decided which one yet).

I hope the story is good. I am really excited to write it because I love writing made up stories.  

I hope you like it. and if you think I can do anything better then you can write a comment on it. watch out for the finished story because I might blog it.

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