Wednesday 23 October 2019

My Long Write.😁

Yesterday and today we did a long write. We started to plane it yesterday. And then we started writing yesterday and today. We had to write it about a photo. Here is is.

Here is my story I hope you Like it. There is exactly 400 words in it. Here it is.

I’m walking through the forest looking at all the trees. All of the beauty. All of the greenery. Then I fell nature calling. I gotta pee. I go and do my business and then I  turn my head and see the most beautiful thing I have ever seen in my life. Tons and tons of beautiful flowers. I walk towards them I can smell their amazing sent. I can see all the beautiful colours the petals are as soft as silk. I can taste the sweet honeysuckle. I can hear the wind blowing the flours to and fro. As I am walking in it trying as hard as I can not to step of the flowers. Then I hear a bark behind me. I turn around and I see a wolf. It is running at me. I am as scared as I mouse in a corner. I start to run away. I am running over the flowers but I don't care anymore. I don't want to be wolf food. I am Running. Running. Running.

I am running as fast as my legs can carry me. I see a root sticking up out of the ground and I think. Maybe I can make it trip over. So I slow down a tiny bit and then I try to make it trip over with the root but it doesn't work. I trip over enstaid. I am now in the ground with a sprained ankle. a hungry wolf a meter away from me with a big appetite. Well. this is it. This is how I am going to die. In a sea of beautiful flowers with and a wolf. Death by wolf. Not how I thought I was going to die. No I am not going out like this. I am going to at least out up a fight. I stand up. I am in as much pain as I would be if I was getting burned on the stake. I grabbed a stick and hit the wolf as hard as I could but it didn't work. It grabbed in in its mouth and pulled it out of my hands causing me to fall over again. Then the wolf was right above me, spit dripping out of it’;s mouth like a leaky tap. Then it opened its mouth and came towards me. I NOOOOOO! I don't want to die like this! Please! 

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