Thursday 1 November 2018
Recount.
For the past 2 weeks in Rimu, we have been doing recounts. One of the recounts that I have done is the one about athletes. The bit that was hard writing it is probably that I haven't really written many recounts. When we had finished writing it we had to go a buddy and read each other's one and then say what we think can be improved. I had to put more description in. Then before we blog it we have to present in it a cool way. Here is mine.
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Hi my name is Braxton-lee and I go to Kawakawa primary.
ReplyDeleteI love this blog because it is so detailed and it has awesome punctuation at our school in room 2 we have recounts that we are working on to make better and so we can publish them.