Hope you enjoy my story that I made on storybird.
Please read my story and leave a comment please!
Tuesday, 2 August 2016
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I like the humour that you have in your story, Mikael. I also like the way that you repeat the sentence on many pages. This grabbed my attention. I can tell that you enjoyed writing this.
ReplyDeleteGreat story Mikael, you held my attention, and i love the comment about the bed and bedside table.Just keep an eye on your punctuation and that will make it even better to read. great job
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