the a&p show.

On the thursday 16 November we went to the a&p show. The next day we had to do a thing about it. here is what we had to do.                                               

                                                                                     This is what I got done.

This is my ride. It is a space ship ride, you get in it and you fly around and then you get shot at.

These are my facts about the a&p show.

 These

 are my facts about the Llama. 

Today we had to present them on cardboard. We had to write a positive thoughtful helpful comment. This is what my buddy wrote for me.

This is my work I hope that it is good.

The ocean maker.

this is the video that we had to write about for our story.

 after I had written the story I had to edit it.we had to write a plan before we got to write out story. we only got to watch up until she saw the light house. the character in my story is a boy even though the person in the video is a girl our teacher said we can change the character .can I please have sume feedback on my story. I want to know if it makes sense where I have put the paragraphs because I do not use use paragraphs in my writing.

this is my story.

The ocean maker.

was flying over a dried up ocean. There were boats everywhere, there is even a submarine. Dave was looking for a cloud to use his Ocean maker. he was looking everywhere with his binoculars for a cloud but he couldn't find one. Just when he was about to give up he saw a lighthouse and the light was going. the light was pointing at a cloud.  he was about to fly to the cloud when a plane appeared out of nowhere and started shooting at him. Dave started to shoot back at the plane. They both hit each other at the same time and started Heading towards the ground.

luckle Dave Survived the crash but his plane wasn't as lucky. it was Smash to smithereens. he got the Oceanmaker get out and started walking towards the cloud. when he got there He  the ocean make it into in the cloud and then Thousands of clouds appeared and it started pouring down. in one month the ocean was back to normal.

movie character day.

Today in Rimu it was movie character day and I was Indiana Jones

 I am the little one. My mum made a gun holder and a thing to pout me wip in. and goes on my belt. The other one in the photo is Mis Tebbett. 

time table

Hi this is my time table for week four. look at what i'm doing this week.

Willam pike

This week in Rimu William pike came over on wednesday. he talks about his leg and how his leg

got chopped of and that stuff.

world's worst children

this week for read and feed the teacher is reading world's worst children 2. My favorite is.

Competitive COLIN

Colin has to win at everything. Rules and fair play mean nothing to him. He has to be the winner. Number one! writing bu David Williams

School holidays

In the holidays me mum and Nikita went to nana and grandads four the last week of the  holidays and it was raining everyday, but on the day we left it was sune. But because they live in Paripari and there was lots of roadworks and traffic it took about 6 or 7  hours to get back home.  and in merchiston we stopt to get something to eat and then mum found a shop coold Submodes tresher and we had a look in it and it is a really cool shop and I ended up buying I think 6 or 7  little goblets on a tray and it was 18 dolls. i also bought a little olden day candle holder and that was 4 dolls . and I brought a little thing and it was 4 dolls. her is a pitcher.